People say my stories are hard to follow?

Your work really isn't that bad. I supposed that after Twilight came out, that a lot of kids wanted to be authors, but none of them possesed any talent....you do actually have some talent. I found myself wanting to read more (even though there were a lot of cliches, but that's okay cuz you seem young and everybody does them when they start off) and actually feeling for Madison's problems. I know a lot of girls who actually play the care-free role but who really need a real friend to lean on, so it felt genuine. you might want to work ln the structure of yur dialouge and how it sounds....ask yourself whether or not if Madison and the other characters existed, would they say those things? you have some other things to work on, but you'll have to figurr them out through trial and error because?that is th bes way, and cuz i'm not your teacher! Good job and even better luck!