I have this habit of writing poetry when I’m really depressed. Tell me what you think?

WOW!!! I worked out a tune in my head to hum along whilst I read your poetry and well, what can I say, I thought it was exceptional. Well anyway, I taped my tune and sung your words to my friends and well, they weren't impressed and called me a fag...I am hiding from them now...totally shitting myself and I hate your poem, it has ruined my life!