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You could make a case for Tom because he is the narrator in a sense, and he tells the audience in the first monologue that this is a memory play -- His memory. moreover. Amanda is my favorite character because she is a proud woman, i always thought the key to her was the fierceness with which she meets life. she is a fighter in all ways and not about to give up.although there is not much to say about the character Jim other than being a suitor for Laura and an old crush for Laura. i found him to be problematic in a number of ways: first, he really didn't give the audience a clue as if he was in love with Amanda.